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If I were to move
Any which way
I'd probably lose
Anything accomplished today.
Stay still
Stay calm
No matter how hard
No matter how much
You want to
Do not break free
Stay as motionless
As can be
Don't question
Anyone
No matter if it
Seems fun
To avoid ruining
Even more everyday
Stay as motionless as you can be
And you'll make it through
Okay.
Any which way
I'd probably lose
Anything accomplished today.
Stay still
Stay calm
No matter how hard
No matter how much
You want to
Do not break free
Stay as motionless
As can be
Don't question
Anyone
No matter if it
Seems fun
To avoid ruining
Even more everyday
Stay as motionless as you can be
And you'll make it through
Okay.
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losing height
i want to tell you my stories,
because i have nothing else to offer.
from moment one
she spread her wings
and jumped
knowing that the ground
would never touch her
as long as she lived
she didn't understand
that she could not live
without a heart
she didn't understand
that the sky had no hold
but the ground would chain her
she didn't understand
that life was not that easy
Literature
Defying Gravity
It's easier,
to write about pain,
than joy.
To focus on
the negative,
than positive.
To stay down,
instead of
fighting back up.
To remain
on the ground,
than take a leap
of faith.
One of these days,
I'm going to defy
gravity.
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Impossibilities?
Have you ever tried breathing
under a ten ton weight?
Have you ever tried screaming
when you're as mute as the moon?
Have you ever tried crying
when tears are all used and gone?
Have you ever tried running
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I feel like everything I do vanishes. Vanishes, or breaks away, or something of the sort. I don't feel happy today. I don't feel like my self. I feel sick. I feel like if I were to stand in the same spot, nothing would break anymore, nothing would vanish. But this may not matter.
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I feel the same way sometimes, but even more than that, I have to say it's awesome you put this up on Loudest Opinions. A lot of people put up crap like "I hate this" or "this group is dumb" but it doesn't do any good. It just gets people angrier. Good for you for stating your opinions in a calm and truthful way, rather than making broad generalizations.
Back to your poem. I know that feeling. Thank you for putting it up. For me, it comes when I try to do something good, but I don't do it well enough, and people take it the wrong way. So frustrating! Was there an event that inspired you to write this poem, or was it just a bad day?
Back to your poem. I know that feeling. Thank you for putting it up. For me, it comes when I try to do something good, but I don't do it well enough, and people take it the wrong way. So frustrating! Was there an event that inspired you to write this poem, or was it just a bad day?